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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hun, great chapter, Draco is just as I pictured him, cute but terribly spoiled. I love how Harry thinks Lucius is nice! can't wait for ch 5.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW GREAT START! I love Lucius and Harry! Your take on Draco was outstanding!! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!!
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story you've got going here. Really well written. You've got my curiosity going, hope you update soon.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, i wasn't expecting to like this story. the plot build up is well done and it's quite realistic. i like the portrayal of the malfoys. many people forget or simple ignore their aristocratic status and the characters sound like cartoons or less sophisticated than they are. the pacing is good and i was impressed with your image of malfoy life. it's a what if look behind the book. the kiss between harry and lucius was subtle and well written. it's innocent and yet at the same time taboo. i look forward to seeing where this goes.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interestin. i like to see more!
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and
post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intresting chapter great job. Please add more soon
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! Please update soon.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love when Lucus purrs....*sighs* Awesome start! Please make the next chap longer! It's like ur teasing me!