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for A New Family For Harry

by shadygrl

person Endymia
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It is so cute. I haven't read chan for a while, but you got me hooked again. I really like the way you portrait the characters and of course Lucius struggle against his own feelings is quite interessting to watch. I wonder how long he can keep restisting now that he saw Draco's and Harry's little show. Please update soon.
person alma
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person rainbow
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Leentjef
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! another great chapter from you.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow......So is that a yes? Hahahahaha....well where the hell did draco learn all that? Has he been sneaking and peeking where he shouldn't be? I need to have more darling! That was...wow...
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!!
pleasepleaseplease udate soon!!
person alma
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is such a perv....I like it! so I was wondering will Draco join these "family activities" or is this strictly Harry/Lucius? I will love this story despite which it is but I was just curious. I love the way this is gong...Harry is soooo cute! I just love sweet, innocent, Harry! Thanks for the update it was awesome!
person ulla
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's not often that I get a good laugh on aff - but after reading Draco's "I'll show him my toys tomorrow. He can watch me play with them." I couldn't help the giggles bubble forward.

It was such perfect dialogue from a spoiled, only child.

And oooer that kiss and it's effect on Lucius - very intriguing. Can't wait to read more!