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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh how wonderful love it how is harry going to be when they finally do it. just wondering not really important but any ways look forward to seeing another update. ^_^
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(mouth wide open)
OMG... say theres more.
Damn this story is on my HOT list.
Cant wait to see what you have for your next chapter.
...Say HP first time will be LM??
OMG... say theres more.
Damn this story is on my HOT list.
Cant wait to see what you have for your next chapter.
...Say HP first time will be LM??
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!!
Are we going to get to see Lucius playing voyer again with Harry and Draco?
What must Lucius be thinking now with Harry saying his name like that? Did he hear it?
Can't wait to read more of it...
Are we going to get to see Lucius playing voyer again with Harry and Draco?
What must Lucius be thinking now with Harry saying his name like that? Did he hear it?
Can't wait to read more of it...
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good
update soon
update soon
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more since this is really really good!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soft and sweet. Love it!!!!
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story can u send me an email whenu update pls keep up the geat work by the way
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i found this update intriguing and promising. again, i love how snobby and yet, completely normal the malfoys come across. harry's adjustments to the home and family and their adjustment to him was told with just enough detail. it didn't drag nor did it skip vital details.
i like lucius' dilemma. it feels truly organic. what he's allowing to happen is wrong and yet he feels sympathetic. a man caught by his unexpected desire for this beautiful, affection starved child thrown into his life.
and the scene between harry and draco was oddly hot and yet so purely innocent. it was perfectly balanced. i really loved lucius' thoughts on whether he should stop them or take draco's place. lol
lastly, i think the pacing is excellent. some folks wish to rush the story or fill it in with far too much and unneeded detail. this makes sense. i get where it's leading and yet, just like real life, it takes time to get there. events are spaced out and life goes as normal between them.
so yeah, keep up the good work. i'm enjoying this.
i like lucius' dilemma. it feels truly organic. what he's allowing to happen is wrong and yet he feels sympathetic. a man caught by his unexpected desire for this beautiful, affection starved child thrown into his life.
and the scene between harry and draco was oddly hot and yet so purely innocent. it was perfectly balanced. i really loved lucius' thoughts on whether he should stop them or take draco's place. lol
lastly, i think the pacing is excellent. some folks wish to rush the story or fill it in with far too much and unneeded detail. this makes sense. i get where it's leading and yet, just like real life, it takes time to get there. events are spaced out and life goes as normal between them.
so yeah, keep up the good work. i'm enjoying this.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I love it when you update a few chapters at a time. I'm glad Lucius doesn't seem to be attracted to Draco, it seems he was more turned on by what his son was doing to Harry than Draco himself. Looking forward to more Lucius/Harry interaction, it's so hot.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it wonderful i look forward to seeing the next update Harry's so naive its just to cute. ^_^