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for A New Family For Harry

by shadygrl

person Leentjef
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post soon
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schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooh! Naughty Harry! He knows exactly what he's doing! Getting back at Lucius for not doing anything with him! Harry is SUCH a cocktease! HA! I loved this chapter! Please more!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I noticed that you said you'd send us an email when you updated in your profile for this story I'd appreciate it if you'd send me an email when you do. Vampirezdarkgurl@hotmail.com
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Hurry up and update!! I must know what happens!! Does Lucius take Harry off and ravish him? What happens?!?!?!
person Jan
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe Harry, he's such a tease! Though I don't think he thought out his plan, all that well, Lucius looks ready to kill or castrate poor Severus.

Please update chapter 14 ^_^
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh shit! you cannot sit there and tell me that harry didn't plan that. for nine years old he's quite the snake. great stroy by the way i can't wait to see what happens next!
person liza
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am fascinated with the direction this story has taken. i wonder how harry knows about lucius' secret panels. though i'm not surprised that he would try to get lucius to react in his favor by hitting on a drunk severus. children, despite their innocence, are capable of deviance. especially if they've witnessed it before. harry did grow up around a spoiled dudley and i'm sure picked up on many manipulative bahaviors. what i am curious about though, is why harry seems to crave such sexual deviance. does he see it as a way to secure personal affection? has he already experienced some sort of sexual abuse before? i'd really like to know what exactly is driving his actions... i mean, he hasn't only sought out lucius but both draco and ron as well. somewhere along the line he must have determined that sex was a good way to insure love, affection or companionship.
person poohbear74
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS STORY AND WANT MORE .
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read soooo many HP-fics on AFF, but I only registered now, just so I could comment on your fic: It's amazing!!! I love how you keep the Malfoy's so IC. Lucius trying to gain (political) power out of every opportunity, controlling himself enough to not simply throw (cute kid-) Harry down and bugger the daylights out of him, but being unable to stop visiting a rent-boy... aaaaah!
Have I told you that I love you?
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy #@*t, harry really is a sneaky little boy. He seems to be playing lucius expertly. Is he able to sense the magic and actively understand what it does? If he can then it is bound to become even more interesting in future. Looking forward to the next update.