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for A New Family For Harry

by shadygrl

person Leentjef
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. Poor Severus - drunk and aroused. Not a good combination. lol Erotic though. Will Lucius 'punish' Harry?
person poohbear74
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
JEALOUS MUCH!
person alma
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person Faschmer
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun! OMG That was a really evil cliffie!! Really Harry is quite the little minx isn't he? He was rather taking advantage of Severus' drunken state... I really like your story, though I am rather unsure if I should be fascinated or squicked by Harry/Lucius while Harry is still a kid. Though I am leaning towards fascinated ;) Your story is rather unique, and I really like it. Still feeling sorry for Severus though, please don't let Lucius and Severus ruin their friendship because of this... After all Severus was rather drunk. Anyways looking forward to your next update =) hugs and kisses MM
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG....Im going to die.
Right now.....but wait.... I have to read the next chapter.
Please let it be soon.
Im so glad that is steering into Lm/Hp
What a naughty Hp. OHHHH...I cant wait for those 2 to be together.
I don't know what to do if HP was to be someone first...other than Lm.
Cant wait to read what you have stored next.

....Love it.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did not expect to like this story but I can't seem to stop reading. I think the way you've written the Malfoys is spot on. I also think the manipulative behaviour Harry exhibits is accurate in regards to the type of things he's learned as a ward of the household. It's like he's set his mind to wanting the kindness and security he believes Lucius can offer and believes affection is the way to get it. I can
person Extraho
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
did harry do that just to get to lucy? he's gonna be a slytherin......
person shey
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! not a chance in hell of Harry being in Gryffindor, that boy is Slytherin to the core! Great updates babe, can't wait for more!!!
person alma
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.