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Hi, I really like your story and I can't wait for an update. By the way if you want more reviewers I would suggest you open the review options to the general public.

I started reading this story right after you first posted it and had only a few chapters, but now I've come back and read through the whole thing to date again. Lucius/Harry is one of my favourite pairings, but I wasn't sure how I was going to like a Lucius/childHarry pairing. Having read through the entire story so far, all I can say is that I can't wait for more, no matter how wrong Lucius lusting after a child may be. I like it that Lucius isn't completely perverted and simply rapes and abuses a child Harry, that he's maintaining some measure of control and consideration for Harry. He at least realises that Harry is too young to know what it is that he wants. Even though this story is rather AU (I think that's the term) everybody is in character, especially Draco...you've depicted the spoiled brat he is very well and humourously. Although I felt sorry for poor Severus' drunken state being taken advantage of, I thought it very clever that you portrayed that slightly Slytherin aspect of Harry, that he could be rather calculating;...innocently calculating, if that makes sense. I like it that Lucius stopped Harry from leading Severus further along a dangerous road, and that he explained to Harry why he was going to be spanked although I somehow think Harry isn't going to mind it so much. I like it that you keep Lucius in particular in character, but that you've also given him some humanity. It would have been very easy for you to have him coldly mistreat and abuse Harry after gaining his trust, but you've chosen another direction. This story is just exceptionally well written, so well written in fact, that it's easy to overlook it's a story about a grown man sexually attracted to a little boy, reducing the squick factor to almost nil. I'm adding this story to my recommended reading list. You're doing a fantastic job and I can't wait for you to update.

this was very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye

Oh a spanking, kinky! great chapter!

That was great. I think you stayed very true to the characters in their reactions. It's obvious that while Harry knows he wants something from Lucius he's not quite mature enough to understand just what that is and what it entails. It seemed like his actions were really those of a child testing the waters to see just how far he could push before he got his way. And I think it's good that he didn't get exactly what he wanted right away. Poor Severus though, drunk and aroused. I just wonder how Harry will react to being punished.

good chapter.

wow, this fic feels sooo diffrent, like kinda shota but with some kind of... moral reastrictions on Lucius, i love this innocent-yet-sly Harry, i

Glad to see that Severus is going to live to see another day. Poor little Harry is going to get a spanking.

Please update chapter 15 soon. ^_^

YES! Bad Harry...needs a spanking! Love it! Please update soon!

Drooling over spanking scene,

*Lilith*

Wonder if Harry will get his way now......
Can't wait to read more!!!

*GUH* So yummy