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for A New Family For Harry

by shadygrl

schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous as always! If Lucius is anything, it's a master manipulator and I can't wait to see how he uses Harry's powers to his advantage. It seems like Lucius is going to bide his time, cultivate Harry's feelings for him and then play on them when the time is right. This just keeps getting better! I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Wolven Spirits
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter :) Thanks! Loved it^^ Great work with the characters! Hehe, definitely can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work!
person Epona
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am a HUGE lucius harry fan and love the way the relationship is building between the two. PLEASE KEEP GOING WITH THIS STORY I AM SOOOOO HOOKED AND WANT TO READ MORE!!!
person Bastian
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you got a new chapter up. Great chapter, left me wanting a whole lot more.

Can't wait for the next one!!
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Powerful kid. Ah but I do love a good spanking! That was an especially good one. Its always nice when they have to count...makes it more dirty. Thanks for updating!
person Leentjef
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good story keep going and post soon
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schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg... im so pleased! i only got off the plane and back to the house... and there's an update! yay! great chapter... :) im very pleased byt he chapter ^_-
person shey
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a new chapter *does happy dance* !!!!!! Great Chapter, Harry is one powerful little wizard!! Can't wait for more.
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter hope to read more soon. Keep up the good work.
person Jilliane
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a nice surprise to see you've updated, and thank you so much for the acknowledgement. I did enjoy this latest chapter, another excellent addition to an excellent story. Your writing is amazing, I can really feel the mix of emotions and feelings swirling through Lucius, the desire to protect Harry, and consequently what he sees as his, his attraction to Harry's power and his craving for it, how it feeds his need to control as well as his growing lust for Harry; simply awesome writing, both erotic and sensual. I'm glad to hear things hsve settled down for you and that regular updates will be on the way, because I simply cannot get enough of this story! Keep up the fabulous work; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!