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for Forbidden Union

by alientheet

person MewMew2
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I must say that so far, I like the direction this story is going. Please update once more when you have the chance.
person qwerty
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing style when you're describing how Draco views the world now that he's a vampire. Very descriptive and enlightening. I wonder how he will react to Harry?
Great story so far. I'm eager to read more.
Keep going!
person riokali
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like where you're heading with this. Most vampire fics tend to show Draco as being uncontrollable and immature after the change but you've done it...added that extra pizzaz that makes us all get intrigued by bloodsuckers..that mature mystery that seems timeless. i think your fic is gonna be worth checkin up coz lately all the fics here have been too dry, so thank you.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice!
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I soooo need chapter 6!!!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I you right now!!!
How dare you put someone into an empty marriage!!!
Evil! Evil!! Anyway get to the Boy love and Yaoi smut! Only then shall I forgive you!
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far. I like your characterization of Lucius- there's a sense of ambiguity there in the latest chapter which makes me wonder exactly how dedicated to LV he'll remain. The line about his regret seems at odds with his earlier actions, and provides depth. I van't wait to read more, and see how you handle the rest of the characters.

I have a question as well- do you have a mailing list, or are you also posting this on another site that sends messages when stories are updated?
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's so hard to see how this is all going to turn out! I want to cry for poor Draco. please update soon!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5! Lucius wasn't man enough to watch things to the end? Poor Draco! The binding was until death right? So does this mean they are no longer bonded?
person Dezra
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slowly the couple came to an understanding. "Harry" came to know that Carla did not hate him, she was simply disappointed by him, and that was possibly even more hurtful to the young man. Carla in her turn came to realise that Draco was not simply a chore, a young stupid slave of the Dark Lord by which she must conceive a son, but a person in his own right.

How did Harry get in this chapter?

Good story though.