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for What do I have to do?

by SnapesSweetheart

schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What do I have to do? To bring him back? To make them happy? To make you stop writing sad stories? Just tell me what I have to do!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this before and I didn't review because I was mad at you. I won't lie, I didn't think I'd ever read one of you stories again no matter how good of a writer you were. The reason I reread and am now reviewing is because I can find it in my heart to forgive you. That and I know what an amazing person you are. The reason I was mad was this:

I'd read between the lies (and this we know means I was living in my own fantasies) and saw that while Harry had broken up with Draco it was to protect him. Draco wanted with all his heart to know what he did wrong and was willing to do anything to make it right. During the final battle Harry defeated Moldybutt but at the cost of Draco. Who in his effort to prove his love to Harry had thrown himself between the two, saving Harry and allowing him to finish off Old Moldybutt. Which was a waste. It's like Snape's death in the actual book. It was uncalled for. And while this didn't happen it was all I could see. So please forgive me. Especially since I've done some pretty awful things in my fics also.

Love,

Nikki
person tas
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good little one shot Snapes. Too bad you had to kill him off though. Some people realize their mistakes when it's too late. Just curious though....Did Harry defeat Voldemort? I'll probably review it on our group too.
~tas
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gulp* awwww...

Poor Draco...to die and not know that Harry still loved him.

Poor Harry...letting his love die with a lie.

*le sigh*
person graballz
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I loved it! Yes, I'm crying (and you're trying to make me laugh) so now I'm laughing and crying and trying to type all at once, and just...wow.

That was SO powerful and sad and I'm sorry you were feeling depressed!!!! *hugs* This just breaks my heart over and over again, and it hits almost a little too close to home with matters regarding the ex...sometimes...

But still...this was amazing and whenever I need a good cry, I know where to go!!!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I had been in a depressed mood that would have been perfect. And it was certainly better than the wan ending (or pathetic epilogue) that JKR forced ink to bleed all over the page in order to create. But, now I am going to go see if I can find something really chirpy to read.
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad!!! Poor Draco! He died not knowing the truth! How could Harry be sooo cruel?
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe!
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just got done reading Chrissy's story and now I read yours. I was still crying after reading hers, and yours didn't help. I can't even see the scene to type this. I guess it is a good thing that I am a really good typist. Keep up the fucking fantastic work.

Kat
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad. Heartfelt charactisations and tragic ending. This is an extremely well written fic.