rate_review Reviews

I love this fic. I've read it three times!

Oh tooo wonderful! I'm glad they got their happy ending! I loved the mock fighting over who is who's.

I haven't reviewed the last chapter yet!!! OMG soz ... OK well.... I must say it was good, but it was a little too sappy for my likings. BUT don't get discouraged, I still enjoyed reading it. And I loved the last few lines, the whole arguing over who's is who's thing, and how that's so typical of Harry and Draco to argue over something petty like that.
In response to the Review Reply, you're very welcome! I will better your stuff for you if you'd like, but I wont be able to get to it for another two weeks. After the 30th of November. Then I'm free to beta all you like. If you'd like to check out beta work I've done before, Check out a fic on this site called "a slave like harry". Look at the second chapter and then look at the first - I've betaed the first chapter but I haven't gotten to the second one because all of this work has rushed up on me.
So yeah!
ttyl,
gorgeousbowneyes

Yay! I love it! You get a whole bag of cookies! *hands bag before quickly yanking it back* But I want one. They're peanut butter. My favorite! *takes cookie and hands over bag* There you go. Enjoy! *gobbles up cookie* mmmmm Milk..... *goes off in search of milk*...

It's not bad....do you want a beta???

so cute me love!

Sooo can't wait for chapter 3! Will they regret this in the morning? Or is this a start of something fantastic?

Oh wow, that was hot. it's nice to know that they wanted each other since that fire. I'd like to see what they are like the morning after when they are not both still on ecstasy.

That was great, I think you should defs continue to write fanfics, your quite good at portraying characters!! Hope to see more!

So...they got some great heat off...however, would the esctasy get in the way with magic?