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for Harry...er...ette

by Severusluciusallthebadboys

schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor harry!good chap!
person NightLo
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...hum...Harry finally experienced what girls experienced - the feeling of lost and the need to sob...will she talk with Hermione? How is his/her 'relationship' with Draco?
person Extraho
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn! he had to make up for that!!! though, who does actually have an orgasm their first time. its almost impossible because the inner muscles are not used to being well, beat up! no matter what you do by yourself there is little that can compare to a guys - merlin this sounds strange - 'hip power' you get my point right. yeah you do. im blabbing. love the story though.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...aahhhahahahahahahahahhhah aha haha ha hahah a heheheheheh =^^=

Aw, poor Harry. He gets a taste of bad, awful, first-time teenage sex and finds its not all its cracked up to be. Good thing he's a horny little tart and will probably try again. >:) Although you gotta feel bad for him as Draco just fell asleep afterwards and left him completely unsatisfied. (Hehehehe)


Keep up the great work. I'm lovin' this story.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry! That was stupid! Sooo need chapter 5!!!
person Extraho
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jolt in the lower regions? yeah, very familiar. draco IS hot, so i cant blame our dear harry...er...ette.
person NightLo
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting, with the special girl's talk on 'social interaction'...how long will Harry be Harriet? Would he/she experience the most uncomfortable experience of PMS?
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated!! :D

Draco is sooo gonna follow Harry into the hall. >:)
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it!
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo funny! He was blushing! I sooo need chapter 4!!!!