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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please email me when you update .The pregnancy would fit better than the monthly mess. Come on now, with his body changing back with the baby being a healthy little boy and malfoy having to take responsability for being a WHORE What about this bracelet? PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!! Poor Harry ... Looking forward to more :)
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 Harry's fallen into his new role rather easily, hasn't he? Well, you already have my opinion about such easy acceptance so I won't repeat it. It's a shame he's abandoning Hermione so easily for girls he's barely spoken to but maybe this will help expand his social circle and make it easier to pass as a girl.
I'm wondering about the lie Hermione told. Harry supposedly has changed his sex but is still the same basic person he was before the spell. If he's from California, shouldn't he have an American accent? If he still has his English one, why haven't the girls commented about it?
I'm wondering about the lie Hermione told. Harry supposedly has changed his sex but is still the same basic person he was before the spell. If he's from California, shouldn't he have an American accent? If he still has his English one, why haven't the girls commented about it?
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 Congratulations on a realistic depiction of first sex. While we read fanfiction for the wild and crazy sex acts where everybody comes at least twice, lubrication is always handy and people experience orgasmic ecstasy that feels as if they're orbiting the moon, the reality is usually far more sordid. You really hit the nail on the head with this chapter.
Harry gave in far too easily to his hormones and now is paying the price. Right now, he's realizing that being a girl isn't as easy as he thought; I hope he goes to Hermione with this news and that she's understanding and not condemning of his mistake.
Harry gave in far too easily to his hormones and now is paying the price. Right now, he's realizing that being a girl isn't as easy as he thought; I hope he goes to Hermione with this news and that she's understanding and not condemning of his mistake.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 So the shame and guilt has set in. At least Harry is handling both better than I expected. Draco seems to be keeping his distance for the moment; I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing at this point.
The part where Harry swears he's going to be better at sex when he's a boy again WAS a little funny but touching, too. If being a girl gives him a unique perspective and subsequent compassion for women, then this whole experience isn't too bad.
The part where Harry swears he's going to be better at sex when he's a boy again WAS a little funny but touching, too. If being a girl gives him a unique perspective and subsequent compassion for women, then this whole experience isn't too bad.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is near-sighted. Reading glasses would only make his vision worse.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...hum...a really 'great' experience for Harry...now his repsect for girls and women would be higher...
Has Minerva heard something?
Has Minerva heard something?
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Surely Harry isn't pregnant!!! Oh this would be bad!!! Sooo need chapter 6