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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG HA HA HA ((wipes eyes)) HA HA seriously you are a freaking genius.... overgrown peacock omg that was good and true!!! i had to read a lucius/hermione fic bc i fell in love with lucius in the healing.... ok so onto chap 2
person smmz79
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so funny... so they got stuck together bc they were thinking of each other in a negative light... thats funny....
person smmz79
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg again i have to say that this is a great story i love it... i love putting my ice cold toes on my hunnys legs esp when they are so cold they wake him up i just lay in bed and act like i am sleeping while i am trying to smother my laughter
person smmz79
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh and it is starting very slowly but starting none the less.... great job with this chap... they really are funny and cute together!!!
person smmz79
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh wow so they have a common goal make the ministry think that they are happy... so with them working together on this they will end up falling in love...
person smmz79
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now isn't tha t cool his car flies!!!! so lucius really is decking hermione out!!! nice and you can see a little bit where his interest in her is starting
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the stories that I first read when I discovered Fan Fiction, and one them that hooked me solidly! It gives more depth to a character that really has less than a few minutes attention in either the books or films, and makes those depths serious and funny, and almost realistic, given the setting.
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just finished reading your story and it was cuteness personified. Especially, I enjoyed the ending. Sad Draco died though, I think it really would have been darling had he been there with his step-siblings. And speaking of which, I felt sorry for Narcissa. Her and Lucius should have at least talked about putting her portrait somewhere else. Maybe not in Malfoy Manor, but maybe somewhere else, where she wasn't covered in cloth the whole time. That's just really depressing, imagine and thousand lifetimes under a cloth?

Anyway, I gotta say, I really enjoyed the beginning of your story the most! Lots of wit and lots of compromising situations, lol. I got a good set of laughs out of it.

Again, it's nice to find a story where Lucius is in a relationship that isn't dominant, highly abusive and deals with all forms of torture and N/C things. So again, much kudos for a happy, "healthy" (for the most part, you get me!) story :o)
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read up to Chapter 2 -- OMG that's hilarious!

I'm one of those people who'll read different stories with different 'ships, even odd 'ships (like this one), but one thing I don't like is extreme violence and N/C, abuse and stuff like that. So I'm really happy that so far so good! You seem to have a great sense of humour and this IS a Lucius story without all the horrid stuff! So many kudos to you!

Really, can't wait to read the rest and will review as I get through it.

:o)