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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow they are working on some feelings here... lucius is very observant
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very hot in a very tender intimate way... i liked it a lot poor hermione but hey having an experienced lover your first time is better than a bumbling idiot
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh there you go SG thats the kind of smut i am talking about!!!!! loved it and under the desk and everything...
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Wonderful. Lovely. Sweet. Sexy. Fictionally real. Utterly wonderful work! Thank you. Hg4eva
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now tell me that is not sweet.. i love that they are still very fiery with each other... also he gave her the class ring that she could not afford.... open your eyes lucius
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow well i was wondering if draco had his own portrait... great chap... poor lucius it must be soo hard but even though he is kicking and screaming about it i think hermione will help him to face his past!!! one way or another
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well they definitely have stepped back away from the progress that was made but he is starting to heal and that will make it easier for hermione to find her place in his heart... well this should be tough for them to overcome but they will
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well he does need to face his demons... why is it that alcohol seems to make people either really stupid or really thoughtful not that you completely remember what you are thinking....
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA omg seriously that was hysterical... i always like ginny portrayed with a lively sense of humor... great chap.. i am glad ginny is there for hermione... that was sooo funny with harry!!!!
person smmz79
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was one hell of an apology... great chap... i think it was my fave so far.. bc lucius is starting to heal and i know that he still has sooo far to go but you can see the progress