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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that they eventually make love and then finally realize that they are both truly falling for each other. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A fantastic story, I have enjoyed every minute spent reading it:-) I love your plot, it is very suitable for those two "lovebirds":-) The arguments are brilliant and the taste of lemon you have given so far is perfect. Update again soon, I am so looking forward to read more!!!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-6: I love the start of this story. So sexily explosive. You can feel the erotic overtones already. Perfect! The minister married them. I
person DB1
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@14. lol awesome chapter, update soon

*DB*
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Fanning self* Whoa honey. That was mmmm-mmm good! I can't wait for more! Ginny's a sneaky little one. And at least now they've both admitted to a physical attraction to one another. Fantastic update, can't wait for the next one!
person angelbaby
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee Hee evil Ginny, I likey. Congratulations on the word usage. The challenge was thrown and you succeeded, now to absquatulate *evil grin*.
Really enjoyed when Lucius used the drag her to him thingie when Hermione was with Ginny. Sort of like unintended apporation. You are such a tease with the fun nookie but no real action. I guess that means when he finally gets to have her your going to write a really amazing chapter (soon hopefully). Maybe after their (fake) wedding ball because it's celebrating their marriage so it should be their wedding night.
How you come up with these great story lines amazes me and so quickly too. Happy writing.......
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Awesome update. Please add more soon
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story so far. i love lucius and hermione and i can't wait to see what you do next!
person kittycat30
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I can't wait to read more!