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Chapter 14: Oh, dear. Lust potion. Ginny is meddling. I didn

that was a really great story. I think i've read at least 4 of your fics so far, and I like all of them. can't wait for the next chapter!

Chapter 15: Wow! I do like this new layer, that Lucius is argumentative because it

really, REALLY good. the intensity between lucius and hermione is vivid and palpable. my only quibble is the ease with which lucius accepted his 'mudblood' wife. hermione had to overcome 10, 15 years of conditioning to begin to like lord malfoy; lucius had to get past at least 40 and a life practically founded on racism. i expected him to be a bit more... vicious, both towards hermione and himself for wanting her in the first place. dont get me wrong - the plotline is great as is. but as a reader it would be nice to have an explanation of lucius' POV of the morphing of his emotions. cant wait to read more!!

I like it. Please update soon.

Good lord honey. I'm not sure how many more of these 'teaser' scenes I can take. Can't wait for your next update!

I like it. Please update soon.

OMG

Wow SG! Great updates. Awesome job! Very well done. Please add more soon.

Oh my! That was so hot and they haven't done that much yet! Can't wait for more!