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Chapter 10: Hermione is easing her way into the elves

Chapter 11: Hermione isn

Loved the updates Sg! Grreat Job! Poor Lucius as finally realised that he is starting to fall in love with Hermione. Please add more soon!

As with everything else you write, I love it, love it, love it. Should be very interesting as to how they come to terms.

Guh... buh... flubbuh...

*ahem* Wow. Now that the blood (and with it, coherent thought) has returned to my brain, I can safely say that that is the hottest non-intercourse scene I've ever read. I was hesitant to read this at first (forced marriage being a bit overdone), but I really enjoy the twist with the charmed rings. Lucius is a right bastard, and you convey that so well. I can't wait for more!

Oh, and one thing, I think it was in chapter 15. You used the word "feint" to describe losing consciousness. The proper word is "faint." To feint means to fake something, like a football player would feint to the right to convince the opposing team he's going right, but then actually go left. I know Microsoft Word is a pain in the arse like that; it tells if you spelled a word wrong, but not if you used the wrong word. I've caught myself doing that. I hope you don't get offended, I'm grammar obsessed.

Hmm does this mean Lucius will smell like a strawberry now? I am interested in the fact the Lucius likes his arguments with Hermione. Was it a coincidence that they always ran into each other to have their battles? They never used to see each other in the street that often, perhaps he was seeking her out.
I love 'midsummers', I was in it during college. That will be a gorgeous ball, Hermione should be a wood nymph.
I understand the whole needing to speak with people that are over 3 feet tall. Glam up for when Hubby returns and blow his mind with your gorgeousness.
This fic is getting hot hot hot (hmmmm Lucius.......) sorry dazed out for second there. New word for the day 'cause it's just fun to say - hornswoggle. Happy writing....

Chapter 12: It was sweet and totally what those two young men would do for Hermione, trying to protect her from Lucius. Oddly, the confrontation seemed to bring Hermione and Lucius closer together. They shared a nice moment talking about his family and his loss. But I

YES! They finally did it! I loved how tender Lucius was with her. And I like that they finally admitted that they're beginning to like each other a little more every day that they spend together. And I'm glad that you said that they aren't going to suddenly be in love. I don't think that Lucius is a man who is capable of being tender all the time. And I think that a large part of their attraction for one another is their passion in general. I mean come on....what woman doesn't want to be in the middle of a passionate argument with Lucius only to have him suddenly pull you into his arms and snog you senseless which in turn leads to passionate and mind blowing sex? Anyway, fantastic update and I really can't wait to see what happens next!

@16 i love this story, i love how hermione is so confused about her feelings for lucius it makes the story more real. please update soon.

*DB*

Chapter 13: Snort! Malfoy Center for Muggle Medicine. Oh dear, no wonder he