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Chapter 8: I liked how Hermione put the Pureblood witch in her place. The atmosphere in the car going home was so thick with lust, I could have cut a piece out for myself. This story is getting hotter and hotter. Absolutely juicy.

The writing just flows along so smoothly. Great work!

WOOOOW!!! Er.... *FALLS FROM CHAIR*!!! That was Hot!! Thank you

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.

Oh, you can be assure that I love the bickering between Hermione and Lucius, it is brilliant and so in caracter for those two! Bickering like this suites the Lucius/Hermione pairing, bickering, sexual tension and somewhere along the line more sincere feelings, but without loosing the bickering. I don't think Lucius could ever be satisfied with a meek and weak spouse, the figths and resistance is what triggers his emoitions and challenges him. Hermione needs Lucius to prevent her life from being dull:-) The man is looks, brains and sex on legs, what more can a girl want:-))
What works in a Lucius/Hermione pairing would come out odd and wrong in a pairing with Hermione and Severus, Remus or Sirius (I always prefer her paired with the older men in HP-fandom, none of the "boys" have ever been attractive in my eyes). Just as you could not change the name from Lucius to Remus in a Hermione/Lucius story, the Lucius caracter will not work in a Remus/Hermione story. The plots are different (one of the reasons they are so fun to read), different caracters demands different plots.
The last sentence in this chapter (17) where Lucius automaticly thought he migth have come down with something because of the odd feelings he had was brilliant, and so in caracter for Lucius!!!

AHHHHH! You did not just leave it there. You'll be the death of us. Well chocolate mouse will never be the same again. I want Lucius, why oh why can't I have him?
I got a little worried about Kingsley, his reaction was strange I got the feeling he wasn't expecting things to work out and so the marriage isn't really real, he was just faking or something. Will he stand up at the wedding ball and tell them it wasn't real? More, more, more, please.....happy writing.

AAAAAAHHHH! I love this!!! Thank you for your general good spelling, paragraph indentation and decent use of the english language! lol. Oh, god, you have to finish this; like right now (grin)I'm goin crazy, love your Lucious, and wait for the next chapter!!! (PS, for SOME STRANGE reason this has been repeating in the backround while I read your story, check it out (grin)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jRxtLwm1MtA&feature=PlayList&p=7C0AAF6B767C7ACC&index=44

Chapter 9: I love Sleeping Lucius. I wonder if it

That was perfect!

@15. great chapter, update soon

*DB*

Yes, Stress indeed!!!! lol I have complet trust in Lucius (and you of course) that he will find a way to make her happy in bed an take all he needs ,and still make her belive that she is the winner...*snort*
that is Lucius's way!
I know you made me happy!!
Let's see if Lucius's" heart troubles "will make him happy!