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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Great story too. Please add more soon
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay smut! I think I'm getting into this a bit too much. Anyway, I actually was wondering how the whole spanking etc. thing would go with the spell in place, whether they'd have to fall in love first or not. Glad to hear they can get into the more interesting stuff if they wish. I wonder though, if Hermione is afraid/nervous at first, will that trigger the spell? If he were to sneak the spanking or whatever on her, say, and it startled her. *shrug*
Man, that sucks about Betas flaking out on you. I've never Beta'ed before, but I like to think I'm obsessive enough about language not to flake. Anyway, you don't need one all that badly; like I said, it's pretty much typos, and they're hard to catch when you're writing. You write a lot faster than I do, so it's no wonder.
Man, that sucks about Betas flaking out on you. I've never Beta'ed before, but I like to think I'm obsessive enough about language not to flake. Anyway, you don't need one all that badly; like I said, it's pretty much typos, and they're hard to catch when you're writing. You write a lot faster than I do, so it's no wonder.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luv this fic! lots of smut, YAY! but lucius needs to be less soft and more demanding i think. cant wait for the next chappy!!!
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19: I just love the hotness that flares up whenever those two come within talking distance. Soon it
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh! so are we to expect a little bondage??? Lucius is very good at that , and already practicing??' Wee!!
And it was a great first time for him to, under the desk! Great
And it was a great first time for him to, under the desk! Great
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16: Ahh, some good, old-fashioned smut. Even if poor Lucius didn
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius WOULD write off the beginnings of love as heart trouble. Ugh, MEN. Not that I can speak from much experience.
Sooo... Yes. Hotness. Fun for all. I'm glad to see that Lucius could be gentle with his new wife, but I have to ask, will they be getting into more... shall we say "interesting" pursuits? Either way I'll keep reading, but I like interesting.
I like how you're taking it slow, not instantly transforming it into "omfg lucius i luv youzorz!!!1"
There are a couple of instances where you make typos, mainly saying "he" instead of "she" or "her." Just a heads up, you might wanna give it a quick once-over before posting, or have a Beta look it over. If you're interested, I wouldn't mind Beta-ing, but I'm sure you can catch the mistakes by yourself. I really like your writing style, and wish you luck.
Sooo... Yes. Hotness. Fun for all. I'm glad to see that Lucius could be gentle with his new wife, but I have to ask, will they be getting into more... shall we say "interesting" pursuits? Either way I'll keep reading, but I like interesting.
I like how you're taking it slow, not instantly transforming it into "omfg lucius i luv youzorz!!!1"
There are a couple of instances where you make typos, mainly saying "he" instead of "she" or "her." Just a heads up, you might wanna give it a quick once-over before posting, or have a Beta look it over. If you're interested, I wouldn't mind Beta-ing, but I'm sure you can catch the mistakes by yourself. I really like your writing style, and wish you luck.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17: I still think Shacklebolt still only wants the best for our two protagonists. It
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: I