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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person AngelBaby
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A Gryffindor tracksuit hee hee evil wonderful friends. My goodness he just can't keep his hands off her, yah for us. This is getting so good. I know i've said it a million times but I love it when he (or Sev) are snarky and rude because when they are sweet it makes you melt into a little puddle. So Lucius causing fights is really all just apart of his charm.

*LABIB* if your reading this I was thinking of you. Scary scary! You guys in the U.S get lots of scary things like earthquakes and tornados, they just don't happen down in my end of the world.

Happy writing.....
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You like older men too? Ugh, god damn sexy older men with their sexiness... I dunno if you had the same tastes when you were 20, but let me tell you, it sucks. Anyways, glad to see Lucius is still his arrogant, flirty self; while I am anxious to see the two together, I would rather not have it rushed to an ending.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Awesome chapter! Please add more soon
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
with each chapter this story seems to get better and better. both hermione and lucius cannot just fall love with each other. too much negative history together to overcome. i can imagine the rage and pain lucius felt seeing her in draco's room, have a conversation with the son he can't forgive himself for losing. poor guy. he really needs to get a handle on the rage thing, though! can't wait to see how's he'd going to fix this problem, though! our hermoine is not one too be pacified with flowers and jewels! update soon.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Poor Draco, Lucius and Hermione. Especially Hermione. But Lucius will fix it. Great chapters. Please add more soon.
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what, I don't think Lucius reaction was that terrible, and I think Hermione will understand some of it. Hermione knows how deeply he greeves over loosing Narcissa and Draco, I think she knows that large parts of his reaction were due to his own terror and pain over facing his dead son. The conversation between Draco and Lucius was beautifully done and very, very well placed in the story (not sure how to explain what I mean). Lucius must come to terms with what he has lost before he can grasp the future, comming to terms with Dracos death also means that he can now remember the good times they had instead of being scared of thinking about him at all.
Lucius should off course have to explain a lot to Hermione before she should forgive him:-))
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum! Is it really another brick in the wall between them??
Or is it another brick in the foundation of the relashionship?? They are sarting to know eachother very well.Love can make you blind ,to the other 's faults!
It was bad,but she is a smart woman, she knows about Lucius pain,she can understand,she will,with time!
This story is so good! thanks
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I thought it was sad when Lucius yelled at Hermione for being in Draco's room, but I am glad that Lucius is starting to overcome his grief. I can't wait to read more to find out what happens between them. I hope that they can come to love each other and stop fighting. Please update again soon.
person tootie
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you are having equal portions of bad Lucius with good and sexy Lucius. Looking forward to the next chapt.
person Jen618
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, I don't have any issues with the age thing; she never struck me as someone who could be with a same-aged partner, anyway. Ron in particular (unless he changed -- significantly.) I'm glad you intro'd Draco here and there will be some interaction. Lucius -- well, we've all seen men who are hurt, haven't we?