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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person kittycat30
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another great update!
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24-25: After the drama of Draco, it was nice to have a more lighthearted view of Hermione and her friends. And now Ginny (who will tell Harry) knows Hermione has done the deed with Lucius. (Well, that was a foregone conclusion for any female with a pulse.) You do dialogue so well.

I agree with Lucius, I think Hermione should have left word where she went. She did worry Lucius and communication about whereabouts should be a normal part of married life. That he even thinks she would have turned him into the Ministry for the bruising speaks of much greater distance between them than I had thought was the case.

The two of them have found a reprieve from any animosity and it seems natural for them to gravitate (or apparate) to the bedroom. Hermione is now on an exploratory mission to learn more about Lucius and his various parts. He was so revved up he forgot to protect her again. It looks as though he really has a subconscious desire for more children. And he
person Terrie
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I love all your stories. I'm especially enjoying this one. Don't waste your time responding to those who complained about something being Canon as you have better things to do such as add another chapter to your stories. This is fan fiction and they should understand that the appeal is meant to be broad and if they don't like a story they should stop reading as soon as they realize it and go on to another story. There are certainly plenty of stories to appeal to all readers. Your stories are well thought out, characterization excellent and dialog outstanding. Authors of your quality are rare and I re-read your stories whenever I need a lift. Oh, and pass along my thanks to Grandma for keeping the kids! LOL
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 27 - Could I possibly get on that list for the shower? Wicked? Yes he is, but we love it!
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed this tale. It is a wonderful pick-me-up and the switch of hate to understading and or almost sort of love (if that makes sense) is believable. Although my idea of Lucius isn't as... nice I guess you could say, your version is just as wonderful. I really like the fact that he hasn't outright said he's loved Hermione or visa versa because that, to me, feels like a betrayal of what the two characters are truly like. Most definitely keep up the work.
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26: Hermione is certainly ruffling some feathers of the old birds surrounding her at the charity auction. Lucius doesn
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27: Ouch! Hermione
person Rini
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* That was so cute with Lucius staring at her feet, not being able to look Hermione in the eye...

What a great story! ^.^

-Waiting patiently for your next chapter-
person Citten
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
but of course darling! and yes thank you so much for the update. i would love to read more and more and..... well you get the point. so i am so glad that you find time in your busy life to write this great story for all your loving fans. :) well i am looking forward to more when you can.
person AngelBaby
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!!! I love that she made him eat and he did. I love that He was worrired that she had left. I love the "Pretty Woman" scene (you know the one with the piano) where he rests his head on her stomach while they talk. It's so intimate and beautiful. Well done. Happy writing... did his spells really miss on purpose hmm?