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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person AngelBaby
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dark corners, dark deeds, "Love Actually" I think. My fav line is "eight is alot of legs David." Random and yet oh so funny.
Gorgeous chapter, the dress sounds devine. Naughty Hermione wanted to play but I don't think Lucius minded so much.
It's always disappointing when your chapters are over, I wish they just kept going on. Are you keeping to your vow, no trackie pants and lots of lipgloss?
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please add more soon!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DB1
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@29. awesome chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am shocked that Hermione would be so daring in public, but I am glad that she is starting to love her husband more. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28: I
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, there is no doubt that Hermione have taken a crash course in Lucius-handling and as usual she gets top grades:-)) He migth be a pureblood, he migth have been a death eater and he migth have several years of experience she doesn't, but Lucius Malfoy have lost this game before either of them even knew it had started:-). A great, great chapter!!!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! That was hotter that a trip to the equator!

I'd like to book Lucius for the theatre a week next Wednesday and then the following Saturday please? Followed by a go in that wonderful shower from the prior chapter.

I seriously love this fic and think that the character development is going at a believable pace, not rushed or fragmented.

I'm eager for the next batch of chapters and I'm even offerring to have your kids for the weekend if it gets your muse working overtime!
Blessings to you and yours
Amethystique xx
person Citten
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(laughting) i just loved the deatheater comment!!!! yeah are grandparent wonderful. sorry didnt review earlier but long weekend my best friend was just married so, yeah. well thanks to coming back to have something relaxing! :)