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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person kittycat30
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stubborn girl! Oh well, he should work for it - the bastard! Of course, she will give in & they can have some hot make-up sex... right? Oh, and does she really think it's the stress? LOVE this story!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31: Oooh, I love your view of Narcissa. I write her that way, too. She is NOT my favorite character, poor thing. She
person Jesse
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! hmm "potion for upset stomach and indigestion please". This sounds pretty fishy! cough*Egyptian*Flu*cough :)
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Citten
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well sweetheart i just love it! you have my stomach in knots and i am just loving this tenchion! well do update and let us know the out come and i am right in supecting that there is another malfoy on the way? :) PLEASE add another chapter! :)
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I almost flipped out when she got annoyed that her wedding BAND was loose and then when Lucius was twirling his around on his finger. I think it's funny that they're both now so used to having them on that they haven't stopped to think what that means. I loved the conversation Lucius had with Narcissa. I love this story and I can't wait for the next update!
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Please Hermione is preggers! Lol! Great chapter! Please add more soon
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They've fallen in love! They've fallen in love! They've fallen in love! Now, they have to have bad thoughts about each other and get pulled together so hard that they knock heads and come to their senses!

I loved how you had him come to terms with Narcissa. :D

I can't wait for more!
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Lucius is finally coming to terms with his feelings for Hermione. Now I just Hermione will come to her senses as well. Please add more soon.
person AngelBaby
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually had a little tear when reading chapter 31. That was so beautifully done. I like that you showed that Lucius and Cissy did love each other, so many make out that they don't. I am really enjoying the relationship between Hermione and Draco, it's fun but also bitter sweet realising that they could have been friends when he was alive.
The conversation between Harry and Lucius was hilarious and very scary to how close it is to a scene i'm writing at the moment.
Your comment at the end of chapter 30 made me think. You won't beleave how slow I was in picking up what you meant. Very subtle, well done....happy writing...