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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I was wrong! I thought it was Lucius that was acting like a git, but now it's Hermione that is acting like a spoilt little child. Please add more soon.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Please add more soon!
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I truly can not express just how much I love your stories. I just had one correction on your spelling. Flue is spelled floo. I'm so not trying to be critical but I just wanted to help. I love your stories and can't wait to get home every night from work to check on them!!!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He should give her a daisy chain crown! That should help him, at least a little.

Man, what a twist! Can't wait to see the rest.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He should give her a daisy chain crown! That should help him, at least a little.

Man, what a twist! Can't wait to see the rest.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am so desperately hooked to this story!!
great plot, great scenes, great well...EVERYTHING!
keep it up.

i'm almost afraid to see it end >.<
person Clara
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo...it took me nearly two hours to read all of your chapters. But I couldn't help myself...I was so curious what would happen. And thanks the gods that you are a fast writer. Though I prefer SS/HG storys, I like yours very much...it is funny, hot and smoochy. I hope, that Lucius will be patient and that Hermione won't be too stuborn. Update soon...I'm addicted to your story.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought I was done for the night, but I had to look, I just had too! And low and behold, you updated another chapter (35) you are killing me!! This just gets better and better. I have to admit, it is kind of fun (in a wicked way) to see Lucius in such dispair, "stalking" his wife and willing to do "almost" anything to get her back, when all he has to do is say those three lovely words which for some odd reason (wink, wink) he just can't get over himself and finally admit to himself that he really does his WIFE! Oh and "upset stomach" is there underlying hint there for Hermione, maybe a "future half-blood Malfoy". One could only wish, as a true diehard Lucius/Hermione fan!!

Thanks again for updating so quickly. I am in the process of reading some of your other fanfiction stories and will review once I am done. I also saw that you are published as well, do you write under pen name? I would love to read your original work as well.
person wishyouwere
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...A little 'up set stomach' from the 'stress'...I wonder...
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30: Their wedding reception seemed to be a lovely, elegant evening for everyone except the bride. I didn