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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

person wicraven
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh love the updates. So Lucius and Hermione are going to have a baby---wonder if it will be twins--good start to the team. Loved Lucius' reaction to Hermione telling him that he will be a daddy again. I just love this story and check for updates every night. Thanks for not disappointing!!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 37:
person Jen618
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this bit. I like a bit of angst.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 33-36: When Lucius puts his foot in his mouth he munches all the way up to his knee. He couldn
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, nice sneak-in with the pregnancy! Totally caught me by surprise. I'm glad you didn't drag this out for six months, have the marriage annulled and have them somehow start over; as much as I love the story, I really don't have that kind of patience.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best Story ever!!!
person Clara
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oohh...now that was cute! I gather that Hermione is careful but at least has not sent him away again. Now Lucius can sleep again. I wonder what they will do and how they will react when they find out that Hermione is pregnant with a little Halfblood Malfoy. Lucius for certain would not be sad about it. I hope the story will have much more chapters. And I agree with you, there are not enough LM/HG storys which are well written.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am glad that they are still married. I hope that they continue to work out their problems as well. With Hermione not feeling well, I hope that means that there is a baby on the way. Maybe that will bring them closer to admitting that they love each other. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She should make him work his ass off for it. But at the same time not take too long to forgive him. She needs to remember that intimacy and love weren't a huge part of his life. I mean, he and his wife had separate bedrooms their whole marriage. He's in uncharted territory and it scares him....but what an adorable little deatheater he is. And why does it sound like Hermione's preggers? Huh? There something you'd like to share with the rest of us?