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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sorry that you've been sick. Get well soon! I love this story!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Feel better soon! I'm really enjoying your story and looking forward to each new chapter, but real life comes first. I've had pneumonia....and it just isn't fun. Get plenty of rest and write when you feel like it. Your readers will still be here. I love your style of writing and have read most of your stories, so keep up the good work!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@43. great story. when will they have the wedding? update soon
*DB*
*DB*
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I love their relationship development and the dialogue is fantastic. I started it last night and I've put off everything this morning just to finish all the chapters available. Well done to you! I'll be looking for your other stories this evening. I wonder if I've read one already, your style seems so familiar.
I'm one of those language usage drama queens, though I generally keep it to myself on AFF. People have betas and it's really not a big deal. I'm not sure why I'm compelled to break my normal silence in your case (you unlucky devil!), but I am so here goes:
mute point = moot point (always)
past time = pastime (not always - it can be written as "it's well past time that such and such happened" but if referring to a hobby or activity it's always "my favorite pastime is such and such" as one word.
Sorry, couldn't help it. The "mute/moot" thing is absolutely one of my pet peeves. Yes, I'm a geeky freak and what of it? *rolling eyes* So, thank you for the lovely story thus far, I look forward to the rest of it. I'll also have a look 'round for your other stories - I certainly hope that you have some. You're a very good writer.
I'm one of those language usage drama queens, though I generally keep it to myself on AFF. People have betas and it's really not a big deal. I'm not sure why I'm compelled to break my normal silence in your case (you unlucky devil!), but I am so here goes:
mute point = moot point (always)
past time = pastime (not always - it can be written as "it's well past time that such and such happened" but if referring to a hobby or activity it's always "my favorite pastime is such and such" as one word.
Sorry, couldn't help it. The "mute/moot" thing is absolutely one of my pet peeves. Yes, I'm a geeky freak and what of it? *rolling eyes* So, thank you for the lovely story thus far, I look forward to the rest of it. I'll also have a look 'round for your other stories - I certainly hope that you have some. You're a very good writer.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. -- Three wonderful chapters!! You are truly gifted. I love this story and it just gets better and better with every chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I am starting to feel like Hermione, a bit impatient! I have to say that I really do love your Lucius and would love to have him come over and play for a bit...who am I kidding, I would like for him to stay permanently.
Glad the kids are feeling better. Hope you feel better soon as well.
Glad the kids are feeling better. Hope you feel better soon as well.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it and i can't wait for more i've been reading this for the past few day's and i hope you get to feeling better.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Sorry to hear you are feeling sick! Loved the update... I have to say when I think ok she has no place to go now.. you twist it and I am in awe! I love the ladder... Mmhhh there is a ladder in the garage... **hugs**