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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the scenes with draco's portrait were very sweet...he matured with death and it was nice to see him treat hermione kindly and give his father his blessing so to speak...it is obvious that they are falling in love with each other, and it is very sweet.
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor harry...he will never understand women, lol! great chapter...
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see the children that lucius and hermione have...they will be so sweet!
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry you aren't feeling well! Pneumonia is really bad! I've been there!You should be very carefull for a few weeks!
Thank you for the chapter! I missed them! I love your Lucius so much !! Please take care of yourself and take it easy!!
We want you writing Slytherin storys for a long time!!!
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just finally caught up to where you left off...very good story...i really enjoyed the humor and the battles between hermione and lucius....can't wait to see how she reacts to the wedding and how lucius is with the baby!
person wishyouwere
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Goodness!
I hope that you have some help with the kids! As much as I look forward to your writing, please do not push yourself too hard. You are prolific, especially compared to other writers out there. We can wait for another chapter.
I am sorry that you are getting flamed sometimes by the hardcore cannon writers. I think that they are missing the point entirely, and they are very closed minded. For me as a fanfic reader, I love seeing how people will run away with an idea, and explore characters that are considered in a different way.
On a completely different note, Christine Feehan is one of my favourite mainstream-ish writers. I was wondering what you think of her work?
person Terrie
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you're feeling better. Maybe Lucius should come and take care of you. No, that won't work. It will just make your temperature higher. LOL
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I can not tell you how happy and excited I was to see another chapter in this wonderfully excellent story that has me at baited breath. I loved the chapter and think that you are an amazing writer and you write Lucius and Hermione perfectly. By the way did I mention that I want your Lucius to come over and ...stay forever.

Just as I was saying what a short chapter this was and about to huff, I read your A/N and now I feel horrible. You poor thing! What a horrible experience to go through and I feel so bad that our dear author was in the hospital for 4 days. I hope you are feeling better and will keep you in my thoughts to feel better. Just concentrate on getting better and, here is the important thing, update ONLY when you are feeling better and well rested. You don't want to have a relapse. Take care of yourself and your family -- that's the important thing.

-- K
person Jesse
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear that you are still sick. Hopefully you get better soon! Oh and I was ever so happy to see an update! Keep up the great work!
person godblessemohair
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry about you getting so sick!!! I hate being sick and I hate being in the hospital more. I really hope that you get to feeling better soon. :[

I love your story. I think its a very original idea and I positively adore the cute way Lucius and Hermione interact. Howin the world did you come up with this plot??? I really must admit, its one of the best Hr/LM plots I've ever come across. I have no criticisms or the like. The only question/request I have is- Can Hermione have another track suit? lol.

I hope you get better. Don't strain yourself too much. Health before Hermione. :] <3