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for Love Thy Enemy

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I think this would be a nice way to end it, unless you can think of more to write. Otherwise maybe a sequel to this one. Dash could be in school along with Jude and both could be on the house team. Hermione could become a teacher at Hogwarts, if Lucius agrees. Harry and Ginny's child or children could also be in school and if their first one is a girl then Dash could fall in love with her. Just some ideas.
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Sg! Awesome job! This was a great story! Please say that you will do another Lucius and Hermione story.
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see that you are back again, and I sincerely hope that you will be well real soon! Be careful though, many get a seccond round with phnemonia a couple of weeks after the first one due to not taking time enough to get well from the first one. Get enough sleep, get a lot of fluids, pretend any dustbunnies don't exist (but take great care of the plotbunnies, they are precious:-)), and take very, very good care of your self.
I loved how Lucius gave Hermione her wedding, it was beautifully done:-))
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice wedding scene...it was a little rushed, it would have been nice to hear more about he details...i love how lucius was finally able to publicly admit his love for hermione...
person Yukino Malfoy
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Hope that you are feeling better.

I love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, i loved it...i really like lucius and hermione pairings...i also like lucius and ginny, but you find hardly any of those....
person DB1
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@48 i love it!!!! aww i wish it wasn't the end!!

*DB*
person Jesse
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a finish! I love every minute of it! The only problem is now I won't have anything to look forward to!!! :) Your work is amazing, keep up the good work.
person Nightqueen
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see your feeling better! Thank you so much for another wonderful story! You are one of my favorite authors here at AFF. I love the way you write my favorite characters and your stories lines are always fantastic to read.
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a beautiful story... one of my fav hg/lm so far. i love how you threw them together and they found away to love, despite all the things of their past. it was so sad that draco couldn't be there for his father or for his siblings, but it was so sweet to see how he was there and influencing them the best way he could. i hope this truly isn't the end of the story... but i can't wait to see what you do next. another lucius/hermione story maybe?