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I like it. Please update soon.

Excellent. I love how she took the first step at getting together with Severus. I hope that they become a couple. Please update again soon.

I like it. Please update soon.

Another great chapter. I love this story and that you will age Hermione to at least 17, so that she and Severus can get together. Please update again soon.

Well, I think you have a decent start here. I wanted to give you some honest feedback, because I think you have alot of potential with this, so please do not take this as a flame of any kind. I am only giving you my opinions as your reader.

The only criticisms I have are that Snape too easily accepted Hermione in his bed, his arms, and his rooms in general. He didn't seem very grumpy about it at all, which is very out of character for the potions master. I think if you add some appropriate rage and responses in those areas, it will make for a great scene. Also, I felt that the part about Hermione climbing onto the couch with him was way out of place and was all wrong in timing. You could take that part out completely and leave the rest and have a situation that helps build the gradual relationship with these two.

Of course....I do love naughtiness, so I did like the little masturbation scene and his overhearing it. That's always hot. You do have a great set-up here and I look forward to your next chapter.

Thanks for writing!

Ah, the plot thickens! Update soon, please.

This wa a great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.

Well, I have an idea. Suppose you add a year with each chapter? Like...something happens at every yule ball until her graduation? It would be interesting with what you could come up with after every dance.

Red

Brilliant. Please update soon!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?