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Please God... don't be one of those mean horrible authors who thinks it is cool to leave Severus alone and loveless. Please make her come back!

Ok... panic attack over. But really... I like this a lot it has the makings of a really long really good story and I hope to read more.

Keep up the good work.

I liked the fact that Snape was upset that Hermione saw it as a one time thing. ok the crying part was a little ooc to critics but I'm not one so fuck them!!! and I read your comments * sorry I do that a lot* and I have to say one of the above comments about the huge cock annoyed me cause lets face it who the hell would write ''she was shocked by his average cock'', '' she was scared thinking that his average cock, 'won't fit in me' '' , come on people its fantasy fiction these are not real people therefore if the writer wants to say he has a large cock then fuck... HE HAS A LARGE COCK!!!!! deal with it!!! Sorry rant's over and done with now, please update soonxx ps. you could try spacing out your paragraph's it makes it easier to read and makes it seem like a longer chapter ;)

What a charming story! I love it. I love Snape's reaction to finding a drunken 14-year-old Hermione in his bed, and his reaction to hearing her masturbate. Scrubbing himself clean in the shower is not what I expected.

I hate that she only saw him as a "loose end," though, if that's how you're ending it.

Poor Sev!

But still, a very charming little story. I enjoyed it!

I loved the build up but the last chp was far too short.

This was a great chapter. A little sad. I hope that even though she is leaving him, that she either regrets leaving and comes back to him, finds out she is pregnant and comes back, or that he follows her on her travels. I don't think he will allow her to not be with him now that he has taken her. I look forward to reading more.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! It was getting so good, please update soon

ohhhhhh man, poor Severus :(

but I'll wait to see what happens next :)

great job!

awwwwww :)

im glad i made someone happy hehehe :)

anyway ;)

ahhhhhhhh u tease :D

u love to leave us waiting :P

really good :) keep it up like that, love it :)

oh wow! lol i should've expected that, but i didn't. I love how you through the whole bed thing back in!! awesome! update soon!

ohhhhhhhhhh its goooood :D

keep it up girl :D