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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honeslty I think it's great where it stands. A huge dramioen fan I loved the first several chapters ; )
But the actual event was very nice, and doesn't need to be taken much further.
But the actual event was very nice, and doesn't need to be taken much further.
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story but I think you could paragraph it a bit and maybe run the spell checker over it one more time. It cn be hard reading through one big pragraph ad still follow the story. But I liked it ad I think you have a great writing style.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last 2 chapters were dynamite, well paced given the situation of things. What are you gonna do about Draco? Will he still pursue Hermione? For love or to spite Ron? Will Ron seek revenge for him hurting her? Keep it going the last 2 chapters got the story running like a nosebleed, I can't wait to see what happens next. CHEERS.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi i just got your email today (sorry) just wanted 2 tell u that i'm going to be looking your story over today & i'll email you when i'm done. l8r
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, these should be easy enough to get through. The chapters are short and easy to follow. If you still want me to beta it, I sent you an email. Please reply and send me the documents in word. I should be able to work through them fairly quickly.
~Wench
~Wench
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It is sweet without being overbearingly so. I'm not generally a fan of RW/HG but I do read them every so often. I like how you wrote Draco. Now how to deal with him and the problems he causes... Anyway I just wanted to let you know that I like it and I hope you update soon.
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really a fan of Draco/Hermione but you wrote it very well. Now I'm getting excited for the coming chapters!
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool Chapter i like how you play Draco as the reformed badass taking what he wants when he wants. Plz, Keep it going.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome... but u need a Beta....
that would be me
and ur my beta
Love u tally Mwah
that would be me
and ur my beta
Love u tally Mwah