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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! Can't wait for them to bond... One question though... Could you please find a beta? You make quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes and it takes away from the story...
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to throttle you for the previous cliffie! Now this? Ergh!!! Update soon! Poor Harry will be so horny if you don;t!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How about "A new life, A Shadow Master."? not the first thing that comes to mind but it sounds ok. i'd have to think a bit more but it does go better with what you have so far. Anyway the story is good can't wait. Can't say what i think on the characters as i don't know just what harry's attitude is excally. Is this a typical relationship or is it a heavy Dom/sub? if so then i would think that his friends would end up turning him away not only because of what he now is but also because of who he is bound to. Hermione would be very against it i think if you go by the way she is described in the books. Lucius, Draco would probably be friends with harry seeing as they are friends with Severus.
I also think if it's a Dom/sub thing then Harry would be really....submissive for the only reason that he'd look to Severus to protect him. He's had control of his life for his whole life and always been in charge and made the dessions, but as a sub he wouldn't have to do that. I'm always seeing Harry that way but that's just me.
Anyway good story i'm looking forward to more chapters.
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Tigeress
I also think if it's a Dom/sub thing then Harry would be really....submissive for the only reason that he'd look to Severus to protect him. He's had control of his life for his whole life and always been in charge and made the dessions, but as a sub he wouldn't have to do that. I'm always seeing Harry that way but that's just me.
Anyway good story i'm looking forward to more chapters.
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Tigeress
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so can't wait to see what happens to Harry when Severus returns. Update soon. Malfoys friendly, Remus friendly. Neville friendly.
schedule
October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa= friend
Twinkletoes= foe
Professors= friends (one or two foes)
Lucius= friend
Draco= friend
Hermy and Ron= foe
Weasleys= friends
Awsome job, keep it coming!
Twinkletoes= foe
Professors= friends (one or two foes)
Lucius= friend
Draco= friend
Hermy and Ron= foe
Weasleys= friends
Awsome job, keep it coming!
schedule
October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. Lucius and Draco friends, Hermy and Ron friends, The Weasleys foe, The teachers neutral. Narcissa foe.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor harry, well in answer to your question:
Narcissa:friend
Twinkletoes: who? if you mean Dumbledore then friend
professors: friends
lucius: somewhat friend
Draco: friend
Hermy and Ron: foe
Weasleys: cept Fred amd George are foes
update soon love this is really good *kisses*
Narcissa:friend
Twinkletoes: who? if you mean Dumbledore then friend
professors: friends
lucius: somewhat friend
Draco: friend
Hermy and Ron: foe
Weasleys: cept Fred amd George are foes
update soon love this is really good *kisses*
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE PURE EVIL TO STOP THE STORY AT SUCH A PART!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers softly* Meanie. update soon.
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Tigeress
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Tigeress