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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Oh how I hope you write more of this story! Too cool!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I think I'm going to love this crossover.
I'm a big fan of the Adams Family. <3
I'm a big fan of the Adams Family. <3
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao oh please say that draco has to visit sometime in the future PLEASE!!!! it would be so funny leaving him up to the devices of harry wednes and pugsley XD
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i lpve the idea that you have going pleaser continue if you choose not to may i have you permission to do so
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well stories aren't put on AFF if the rating is under adult only
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is certainly enlightening. I never thought to cross HP and the Addam's family together. This will certainly be interesting, to be sure.
Besides that, I'm afraid I must frown at your "dependence on reviews". I strictly believe that one should write for themselves and not demand for reviews because instead of receiving anything of substance all you'll get is "Thanks, this is great!" or "MAOR!!1!". Completely thoughtless things that don't say a thing of your readers' intelligence. I don't know about you, but I'd rather have people who have more than two braincells to rub together reading my stuff instead of tweens that can't connect two sentences. But whatever floats you boat.
Lady D
Besides that, I'm afraid I must frown at your "dependence on reviews". I strictly believe that one should write for themselves and not demand for reviews because instead of receiving anything of substance all you'll get is "Thanks, this is great!" or "MAOR!!1!". Completely thoughtless things that don't say a thing of your readers' intelligence. I don't know about you, but I'd rather have people who have more than two braincells to rub together reading my stuff instead of tweens that can't connect two sentences. But whatever floats you boat.
Lady D
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you update I give you lots of cookies!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! *gives cookies* maybe next time I'll give you brownies instead. hehehe
~waiting anxiously
~waiting anxiously
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this one is not a flame and I do want to read more on this fic. I'm just giving you constructive criticism and you are wellcome to ignore the whole thing if you want.
I like your writing style, I think you can do a great job on this one, but... (oh, the horrible 'but')
As prologes go, this one was rather obscure and VERY SHORT (my major complaint). We don't know who is talking (Well, I know about Pugsley and Wednesday and I imagine the third one is be Harry, but there is really no way to tell) and who is this Henry character or what is he doing there.
It would go a long way into the heart of your readers if you gave us something on the characters - who are they? how did they become a family (in Harry's case)? how do they interact together? that sort of thing. There was nothing to hold on to in the prologe.
Don't be afraid to expand your narative.
And please update soon.
I like your writing style, I think you can do a great job on this one, but... (oh, the horrible 'but')
As prologes go, this one was rather obscure and VERY SHORT (my major complaint). We don't know who is talking (Well, I know about Pugsley and Wednesday and I imagine the third one is be Harry, but there is really no way to tell) and who is this Henry character or what is he doing there.
It would go a long way into the heart of your readers if you gave us something on the characters - who are they? how did they become a family (in Harry's case)? how do they interact together? that sort of thing. There was nothing to hold on to in the prologe.
Don't be afraid to expand your narative.
And please update soon.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is Harry Desdemon? I am so excited about this story, cause I love the Addams Family, and I love Harry Potter, so yeah...How is Snape going to come into this? Is Harry going to go to Hogwarts, or is Snape going to be a family friend(that would be interesting). Anywho, please update soon!