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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. i cant wait for the next chapter.
i cant wait to see the chase...
thanks for the update
i cant wait to see the chase...
thanks for the update
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooohooo, I was mentioned in the story xD
It's good.. Both Ron and Harry are quite well in character.. A few slips here and there, but nothing really noticable.
Not that much smut -Sobs- but I guess I'll live.
As for the part to come, I hope you do something as erotic as the first chapter with hermione teasing Harry under the table and that..
There are so many cliched ways by now, but I'm sure you'll do it well.
Good luck.
It's good.. Both Ron and Harry are quite well in character.. A few slips here and there, but nothing really noticable.
Not that much smut -Sobs- but I guess I'll live.
As for the part to come, I hope you do something as erotic as the first chapter with hermione teasing Harry under the table and that..
There are so many cliched ways by now, but I'm sure you'll do it well.
Good luck.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. i like your writing style and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It would have been funny if she had gone over to where Harry was under the invisiblity cloack and actaullly touched it and almost caught him but then decided that it was just something else.
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far! Next chapter please!!!
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas!
This story is soooooo HOT.
You are doing a great job. Keep up the great work.
Thanks
This story is soooooo HOT.
You are doing a great job. Keep up the great work.
Thanks
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hermione obviously knew that Harry was watching her and decided to give him a show. I hope that you don't make poor Harry wait too long to realize what he feels for Hermione. Anxiously waiting the next chapter.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice. the tease that hermione is! why do i suspect that she knew harry was there?
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love the story so far! I especially like your writing style. Not bad for your first adult fan-fic. You've definitely got a new fan. I can't wait 'til the next update so please update soon!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be good. Can't wait for more. Harry and Hermione forever.