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Love this! Please update soon!

Wow, is all I have to say. You know, I've never actually reviewed before on this site. But your story just HAD to make me review!

Well done! Your story is very simple, yet enthralling at the same time. You don't need to have too much going on in each chapter to grab my attention, which is normally hard for an author to do. And you don't just rush into things unexpectedly, which I find a lot of authors on this site tend to do. Your plotting it out smoothly, not just throwing things in left and right. And I like that you're having Harry so confused on what to do and he isn't just blurting out his feelings (again, a lot of author's downfalls). And Ron as a mentor? Haha, nice touch.

So please take your time on the next chapter, and I hope you get back to it soon from your hiatus. And again, try to keep this nice pace. It's good for your story :-)

Hey Bonza,

I'm an author too, so I know how awesome it is to get reviews for a story that doesn't seem like it's getting a lot of love. So far I like what you've done, although it feels like your story is going too slow at the same time it's moving too fast - and what I mean by that is that it feels like you're rushing your characters into certain situations but the pace of the story is being slowed down a little by the lack of major action so far. Maybe it's time for you to introduce the character with the jealous and hateful eyes and make him a true antagonist in your plot? Or maybe Harry could happen upon Hermione doing something sexual again. It's up to you, after all, you're the author.

I liked your homage to Forever Knight. I read that story months ago in one sitting, from dusk til dawn. Eve can really write, can't she?

Oh, and what's up with Ron in your story? He and Harry seem a little *too* close, if you know what I mean. I never pegged Ron as one to Seek for the other team, but well, you never know....

I hope you keep writing!

Hey, nice fic! At first, I thought it was going to be rather short, but it has many elements to go a long long way.

I really liked the whole story, the way its written and all that, but I don't understand... why is it an Alternate Universe? Either I have some serious memory problems or everything I read seemed according to the books... Although I wouldn't rule out the possibility of me having memory failure.

Anyway, I'll be expecting your next update, because I really want to know what will happen next. Keep it up and take care!

P.D. Happy New Year!

Haha, Dude, I totally get what you're saying. I write fanfiction too (only Naruto for now, but now I've read Deathly Hallows, I'm considering writing Harry Potter as well. Anyway, Christmas has thrown a huge writer's block on my head, so I'm all out of ideas for my unfinished fics. Let's hope we can both write again soon, right? Good luck!

Oh, yeah. I haven't read your story yet. I'm in a public PC, so I have to download the chapters to read them at home. But I promise to review once I read them! They look pretty good after all!

Found this story only today and i like it very much looking forward to the next update. Hope you have a merry xmas and a great new year

Off to a decent start, are you making ron and draco gay? it seems that way, doesn't matter just curious.

I've read all of the chapters now and I can't wait to read the next.. I hope you will have time to write soon with the holidays..

I've only read 2 chapters so far and I love it.. great story .. can't wait to read the rest. : )

Nice first chapter. Not to overbearing, but not to light either, I'l keep reading and reviewing, I'm liking what I'm reading and can't wait to see what happens next. CHEERS