rate_review Reviews

I'm about halfway through this story. I especially loved the sweet scene in the treehouse. But you have got to learn the difference between the plural and the possessive! It's terribly distracting to read "Lily Evan's" when you mean "Lily Evans" and "Slytherin's" when you mean "Slitherins." If you just take care of that, you will make this as readable as such an enjoyble story should be.

A good English beta would catch these, as well: "a flare for Potions," should be "a flair for Potions," and "woe" should be "woo." Just depending on spell check won't catch the sound-alikes. Do this good story justice!

So sweet and moving. I like the idea of Severus having a secret love affair with Lily; it almost seems plausible! Nicely done.

This is beyond a doubt the best Snape fic I have read so far. I love how you portrayed both Severus and Lily and their friendship perfectly.