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for The Choices We Make

by StormPrincesa

person rainbow
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sooooooo good
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3. Earth. The child would a balance.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. I hope you update soon.

I see Draco being either air, or fire. He is Dragon after all. I have never thought there was any evil in him. Beneath that so called evil exterior, beats the heart of a noble dragon. Fierce and loyal.

As for a child, I agree, earth would suit any child of Harry and Draco's.
person alma
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start.
person alma
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. as for power i think wind.
person Dezra
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please? I'm very intrigued.
person redmeadow
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Kind of crazy though, Draco jumping in front of Dumbledore just to have Snape jump in front of him, just to have Harry jump in front of him. It seems like Harry was behind in his quota of life debts. I love Godric and Sal in this chapter. Funny stuff, and really Godric is right. About time that boy caught a break. Look forward to the next chapter. Is Sirius going to come with him?

As for a child. I would go with earth. A couple of reasons, but mostly because earth is touched by all the other elements, as well as it being sturdy and hearty.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aweeee so cute!!
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please update soon.
person NightLo
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...Harry made a great choice of sacrificing himself, and this is considered a very...noble yet foolish decision. Still I would love to know what will happen!!!

For Draco's element - well, can he have more than one? Or can he obtain more by training? Then I would love the combination of ice and darkness!!!