rate_review Reviews

My heart was breaking for Harry during the scene in the graveyard. He's lost so much, but the strength he's showing here is really amazing. I'm intrigued by the letter sent to the Ministry. I can't wait to see what happens with that situation. Your attention to detail is really wonderul, like with the statues in the cemetary. That was lovely. I'm really enjoying this story more and more, and I am really looking forward to reading the next part. Thank you very much for the update. :-)

Ohh yay update ^^, Glad i checked for it. Doing good!!!!
~Leaf~

Omg wow ^^ finally a story that sort of ignores the last few chapters (or at least parts of it) of the last book *dances* You really have a unique style of writing, I like it! I find your plot *up until now* much more plausible than that *cough* stupid epilogue *cough* Rowling wrote, but hey, it's her book, not ours, and that's why there's fanfiction ^^ I'll be keeping an eye out for the next update :)

//yume no yami

I like that you're taking such care to establish Harry's situation in this new Voldemort free world before you launch into the story of the romance. It makes him seem just that much more lost. I really like the way you write this story, and I hope you'll update soon. If there is a an email list, I would like to be put on it, my email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
Thank you for the story,
Lunatic with a hero complex

I haven't read DH yet (not that that's stopping me) but I was wondering where Teddy is. I don't know if he went somewhere after his parents deaths but I noticed he hadn't been mentioned yet. are you leaving him out? great that you switched Ginny for Fred (well, not for her but you know). easier for the story and the idea of leaving George alone doesn't appeal.
one thing though: it's St. Mungo's. with an n in it.
can't wait for more of Snape! especially awake Snape :-P
hope for more soon!

I just finished reading this, and I'm truly having a hard time finding the words I want to say. This is BEAUTIFULLY written. It just moves flawlessly, and the characters are so well done. You've captured them perfectly. I love the details you have in here, and you describe them so vividly. This is a wonderful story, and I really can't wait for more. Thank you very much for sharing this.

hey loved the pigeons and the moldywart and his death munchers, i've heard that somewhere before too but i cant for the life of me remember where. It was better without the funeral, sometimes things like that are more effective when saying in passing. Loved this chapter by the way his meeting with Snape was really sweet. Shame he wont be out for hogwarts but i didnt think so. Didnt anyone gather-up nagini's body after attack, they'd be able to get the venom for the anti-venom from that? Sorry i just want Snape to be well again. Him, Harry n Remus, they were my favs followed closely by the twins. cant wait for next bit.

So..this is really good...Is there any way you can i dunno..email me or something when you update? cuz i don't check this fiction section often and I would adore to continue reading this story!

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~leaf~

I love this story. It's very depressing, but it's well done thus far and has me interested to keep reading. I look forward to more. ::MV::

WOW...

what a chapter, now that was intense. though i did cringe a bit when he crushed the moonstones, they're so beautiful. I know its a horrible thing to say but i'm glad Harry's blaming himself for Ginny's death because he would so do that. Feel bad about Snape being in intensive care still, n Harry missing the memorial. Please please please let someone find that unsympathetic git who said that to Mrs Creevey and push him off a cliff. I wanna kill im myself, what a tool. Urgh, anyway hun cant wait for the next chapter.