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June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have very much enjoyed reading this story. It was wonderful. I am rather sad that it seems to have ended. Your character portrayal was very believable for me and I could not seem to stop reading 'til the very end. I wish you well and thank you very much for the entertainment! -Azrea
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading what you have out thus far of your story. I truly hope that you will finish it. The way that you have portrayed Harry to me is amazing. No one, fictional or otherwsie, could go through all of the things that he has been put through and not come out unscathed. And I enjoy the way that you have portrayed Severus as well. He is my favorite character from the books as well as the movie! I have only been dismayed by the fact that he hasn't been in enough of the story as yet...As I said, I truly hope that you finish writing your story. So far it is engrossing and immensely enjoyable.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Simply outstanding
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thi9s is a SPECTACULAR yarn you have weaved here! I was dragged to the end screaming and exhilarated! ^-^ I DO hope you'll continue? T-T
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far though Harry appears to be a bit of a wimp. He should have stood up and ask that street full of people where the hell they where in fighting LV, why the ministry wasn't there. As well if he is trying to be an old pureblood family from Italy James is the wrong name to choose; that is an English name. Try googling names if you don't know any Italian ones, there are quiet a few sites out there.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is quite good. i quite liek what you've done with it so far. please update soon ^^
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How will "James" explain the fact that he is Italian but his name is not?
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one of the best chapters yet hun. Loved it. I cant wait for the next one. The conversation between McGonagall and Harry was perfect. Completely in character. Loved it.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow pretty cool story hope you keep writing! :)