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for Comfortably Numb?

by luvhp

person kenzie87
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey - you've reviewed both of my fics, so I felt I owed it to you to check out your work. I like this story. I was never particularly happy with the epilogue - it was so... boring! Canon Ron/Hermione was never something that bothered me during their school years, but I never saw them as being right for one another as life partners. I think you've explored some of the potential workings of that relationship beautifully. Your author's note at the end suggests that perhaps it's not just Hermione suffering? I'm sorry if this hits close to home for you.
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been there, not for that time span but I've definitely been in one of those relationships. That was very moving.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww that story is so sad
*frowns*
i love ron and mione....never really read there fiction cuz im more into slash but its good

thankyou for reading my story hun.

BTW I am a huge fan of Roswell also. And Harry Potter. I was wondering if you can please post your stories on my site?it'd mean alot to me. I know that its a pain in a butt to copy and paste over and over again so if you want I can help you. I can make you a name and password and start posting some and then give you the url and password and you can do it yourself. The site is so new and we really need more stories and I see taht you have lots. that is why im asking lol.

What shippers /couples did you write for roswell? i was a huge maria and michael fan. I also love UC. but I loved lots of shippers. was not a fan of liz thoughh lol.

anyway check out my two new stories please. Confessions and Distroying the heart of the family.

angela
person Katay
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think oftentimes what we write about is based upon our own experiences and those of the people that surround us in our daily lives. It's our way of coping and dealing with them. However fiction also presents a world for us to forget the realities of life and simply live through someone else that is able to overcome what we weren't. Your fic was extremely heartfelt and well written, one of the better oneshots that I've read. Don't let life get you down, bitch-slap it in the face and make your own ups!!!
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I heard a beautiful country song yesterday, the chorus of which seems very fitting and I'd like to quote it here...

"She wants to be wanted
She knows that she's needed
She wants moonlight and romance
Soft music and a slow dance

She wants him to hold her
Like he's never touched her
That's how love began
She wants to be wanted again"

Matter of fact, the whole song is very fitting... it's "She wants to be wanted again" by Ty Herndon. Check it out and enjoy...
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is far from fiction. Reminds me of the life my parents lead. It almost made me cry... it's really sad!

Hey, thank you for reviewing my story, too! And yes, I also wish my first time had been like that *sighs* ;)
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how well written this is. It was sad hearing it from Hermione's point of view but it really rang true. Well done.