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for Divorce, disaster and denial

by clairevictoria

schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I vote for twins in honour of Fred and gorge but I think they should both be girls and just as bad as thier father at pranking people.
person h2elena
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice wedding lol girl for andie and george as there are more boys than girls in the family.I'm waiting for harry and lucius to have twins or triplets.
person h2elena
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh hot and sexy lol very nice i loved it when you wrote and felt percys little god at his entrance.Cant wait for the wedding yay my harry and lucius hot boys.
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I know i asked for Draco top but that was still great. Love ya. Cant wait for Lucius and Harry's wedding. Hope your essay goes good.
person h2elena
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok great wedding percy should be on top as he rarely gets to ok politeness out the window fuck draco.lots of candles some fore play in a bath full of bubbles and bodies glistening with sensuous oils and let the games begin
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco should top I just dont see Percy being anything but a bottom. sorry . love ya. love your story. update soon.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really well done! I loved it and I don't usually read het! Anyway, My name is Kira. I 19 but will be twenty very soon. I was born in the U.S. and my father is in the U.S. Army so we moved around alot. My grandmother is Dutch and i am very close to my Dutch relatives. I love Europe and would kill to live there but for right now I live in the middle of redneck land USA. I love reading Slash fiction and love this fic and Tori I hope your Nan gets better.
person RaveXTM
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was the first het sex scene I've read in years... it wasn't even that bad, just not my thing...
When I started reading your story, I didn't like it at all, but after a few chapters it captured me and dragged me along and it started to grow on me. I didn't like it because Lucius was so very OOC and there was a little depth in the characters, but the depth came along further chapters and you made Lucius so adoribly funny :)
Anyways, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Nikte
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh George is really sweet and understanding, and Andie sure recover quickly from what Vasili did to her. Can
person h2elena
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol beautifully done right amount of smut and sex.loved it.I hope your nan feels better soon lol sounds like you need a rest.I was born in england but came to new zealand as a child.i have one child a daughter whos my greatest achievement in life and my greatest joy as well.i'm over 21 and thats all i'm saying.My daughter and i are off to the uk,europe and thailand on the 6th september.i will miss reading this wonderful story while i am away so i will have alot to catch up on when i get back.take care of yourself tori.