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for Divorce, disaster and denial

by clairevictoria

schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT CAN I SAY LOVED IT
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lle ume quel, Mellonamin. Diola lle,Oio naa elealla alasse'. Amin naa lle nai, Rwalaer. Tanya nae sai eina. Amin harmuva onalle e' cormamin. Cormamin niuve tenna' ta elea lle au'. Amin autien rath. Lissenen ar' maska'lalaith tenna' lye omentuva.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and it was touching to see them interact with their family and friends.
person Faschmer
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh can Harry cry when Lily goes on the express pretty please?? Since he is all hormonal due to the pregnancy... Great story and chap!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! YAY! This chapter was fantastic! I always loved listening to Elvish spoken in LotR. I don't know if it's the same, but it's beautiful either way. I think I'd like to be in Slytherin, but I'm pretty sure I'd end up in Gryffindor or- I rarely admit this- Hufflepuff. I'm a bit hard-headed and take too many risks, but I'm also WAAAY an optimist and I pride myself on being honest and loyal.
My next chapters of "Third Generation" and "Nobody Tell" will be dedicated to you in honor of your immeasurably fantastic update!!!!!
Cheers!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... thank you for your comment. I took your advice! I'm so loving this story! It's a perfect balance between sweet and sexy and conflicted! The engagement rings are beautiful! Especially Andie's... And that flower is gorgeous! Cheers to you for an excellently researched and very well written story! On to the next chapter!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! I absolutely adore babies and children! This was a marvelous chapter and it's a fantabulous story. There's only one thing that I don't like about this story... THAT THERE'S NO MORE FOR ME TO READ YET! Hurry up and update... please??????????????
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. elvish sounds so sexy in my head. I believe I would be in Slytherin. Since you asked. Love this story as you well know. Cant wait for more. Amin harmuva onalle e' cormamin, Mellonamin. Aa' menle nauva calen ar' ta hwesta e' ale'quenle. Namaarie.
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool
person h2elena
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh how sweet a beautiful baby girl love the names.I shall have to catch up with this story when i get back as i fly out on thursday. Take care lol and keep up the great work.