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for Divorce, disaster and denial

by clairevictoria

person poohbear74
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IT HAS ME CRYING INTO MY KEY BROAD AGAIN, THANK YOU FOR A WONDERFUL STORY AND THANK YOU FOR TAKING OUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS ON THE STORY.
person h2elena
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh sweetie what a lovely ending to this beautiful story have loved it all.PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE DOING A SEQUEL. i would love to see james with scorpios or is he quite a bit younger than james not that that matters.And i so want to see who has the next set of twins harry or lucius as there supposed to be 4 sets of twins that they have.Also i would love to know what draco and percy have.Can you email me at helenaloud@gmail.com when you do the sequel.Fantastic job on this story.
person Makovaso
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good!! please update soon!
person Jan
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See!!! That's why parents don't let their kids have their boy/girlfriends into their bedrooms without supervision, and more so to spend the night over. They start to get ideas and then look what happens next!

But your right, James and all those out there that have gone through the same thing, have definitely learned their lessons, me included ^_^

But oh, James almost made me cry. That was so sweet and so very true what he said. "It means gift and he is one. He
person h2elena
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi lol well i have caught up with the story love all the babies cried my eyes out for percy and draco when their little baby girl died so sad.love harry and lucius babies names orion,cassie,vela and phoenix.Jmaes is better off without that slimy little rat phili he certainly doesn't take after neville or luna thats for sure.I'm hoping james will end up with scorpios.Keep up the great work loved to see a sequel to this wonderful story.UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
person Jan
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe Harry just send his son and boyfriend to his room to have more privacy to then self (James and Xenophilius, I mean). If I did something like that in my parents house... well let's just say, poor me. I wasn't even allow to be in the house alone with my boyfriend, when I was 18 years old, let alone in my room. He he... ^_~

Please update chapter 24 soon. ^_^
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I wish I could vote on Lucius getting pregnant along with Harry. Just think, they could be in competition with Molly and Arthur! The house is big enough for all of them. Let's not forget Draco and Percy, they have healing to go through, mourning their daughter. Percy thinks Draco should be the next one pregnant? Oh well, maybe another story, sequel perhaps? I'd love to read that!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
person felawred
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
C) I leave it open ended, with the possibility of a sequel
Send the kids to school.

I hope you update soon.
person poohbear74
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT CAN'T END!.
I JUST LOVE THIS STORY.
LOVE THE CHAPTER AND THE WAY YOU HANDLED PERCY'S PROTECTIVENESS OVER HIS ONLY CHILD AND HOW ANDY AND LUC TALKED ABOUT HER AND GORGE WANTING TO MOVE OUT AND WHAT LUC WANTED AND NEEDED FROM HIS CHILDREN.
person poohbear74
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I VOTE FOR C TOO AND THE SEQUEL!!!