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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am just starting to read your story and have gotten to the first chapter. I have a problem in that you say that Harry walks out of the lawyer's office and into "her" arms but you never quite say who "she" is and then this Andie person comes in and I get totally confused. I'm going to keep reading and hope to figure it out but can you send me an email or something and help me out? Thanks. laney12186@yahoo.com
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HAD TO READ AGAIN, YAP, STILL LOVE IT!
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you wrote this last year, but I just had to say how much I enjoyed it. I am new to this site and found the story because I am reading Salvation right now. Really love that story too. Please, please keep writing, it's great.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was the most amazing story I've had the privallege of reading for a while. Thank you
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me tell you what I like most about your story. It's a well built house - nice foundation, very nice framing. I love the detail. The characters are believable within the universe you've created. What I like most is that your story is driven by dialogue. You have wonderful turns of phrase, foreshadowing and the ability to build tension where it'll do the most good.
Bravisima, molto bella!
N!
Bravisima, molto bella!
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is a great story and I hope to read more of your work.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well the whole James thing was unexpected but good, I am glad it ended well. I hate getting into a story only to have all my faviorts die. look forward to more of your writing.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a very good story, i couldn't bring myself to stop reading
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you I can't stand Ginny grrrrr
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT, YES, THE WAY YOU HANDLED THE PROBLEM WITH JAMES IT WAS RIGHT I HAD IT HAPPEN TO ME.
I AM SAD THAT IT WILL BE OVER SOON.
I AM SAD THAT IT WILL BE OVER SOON.