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 Pg 1: Are they actually Harry's children? She was promiscuous at school (canon), so why not after the marriage too?

Nice story. Well plotted. Thanks

Where to begin.
You are a tremendously clever author and can be a brilliant mom should you have kids of your own. The ability to pick ideas and develop them into full fledged cohesive plot is rarer then you might expect. There's a great mix of dark to offset the happiness but it isn't chaotic and with the exception of Andi very logical. (I have a hard time believing a romantic acceptance of sex when her initial horror was reinforced so strongly and recently). What made this so very extra special was using Tolkien's elvish, that tops it all; even the really hot sex scenes...which you are really good at writing too by the way.

Just wanted to say as a lover of fairy tales, thanks for sharing your muse and all the best wishes from a grateful reader.

Thanks for the bloody Mary-sue warning - not! I'm sure you 'forgot' to add that warning because you knew no one would waste their time reading it ... There's 4.5 hours of my life I'll never get back, and I'll certainly never read another one of 'Avenging Angel's stories again!

I would like to beat Ginny within an inch of her life and then start over again. At first I thought that it was his money that she got (and I would still be mad at her) but to take his children is unforgivable. *Snuggles Harry*

oh my god please kill ginny off, thats sick!!!!!!!!
her own kid!!!
i know it is only a fic but did my heart pound or what!

is anyone else gonna get raped?
bloody hell its like all this story is about

told you, another rape!!

you should also put N/C in th warnings

Very good story. I really enjoyed it especially as I love mpreg :)
Cheers xxx