schedule
November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with the first commenter, paragraphs and spacing would make this easier to read. I like submissive!Lucius or slave!Lucius and think you captured him perfectly! This was very intense and sexy ;)
schedule
August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! So very few fan fics show Snape as the master. I love it. Please keep going!
schedule
July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The format made it a bit hard to read, some spacing would have been nice. Still it was an interesting read...although I generally prefer Lucius in control.
But I enjoyed the way you had the story unfold, yet I am still not sure what Lucius desire is: Being a slave or being broken, or both? Anyway, I guess I can see that the way I prefer. Unless you are planning a second part? *puppy eyes*
Thank you for sharing.
But I enjoyed the way you had the story unfold, yet I am still not sure what Lucius desire is: Being a slave or being broken, or both? Anyway, I guess I can see that the way I prefer. Unless you are planning a second part? *puppy eyes*
Thank you for sharing.