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bella should help them and rabastian should die or go to azkaban.

i like the idea of siri being held captive and Liy helping to find him i duno
but either way im excited to see where this all winds up i cant believe there
may be only three chapters left :-(

I believe you should use the weasley twins who are illusioned to look like dearest
'friends' - maybe Tommy Boy so we can see her grvoel - of Bellatrix and have them take her out.
So you can have the weasley twins as unspeakables of something, not that anyone will know.
Whilst little siruis is struck by a vision future love and anguish that leaves him a little
traumatised.

Bella lead them out.

WOuld you just write your damned story? God above Chelley! Its YOUR STORY! Write it how you want to! Stop taking polls to get more reviews. Just write the fucker. I've been following this story first on HPFandom, then here. Write what you want to write and go on with it.

--RD

RDWIND:

I think that your comment was rude and uncalled for. If you don't like my polls then don't read my story. I assumed that people would rather be asked what they wanted to see happen rather than me abandon my story, kind of like someone else has done. I have severe writers block on this story and had no idea where to go with it...you are absolutely correct, IT IS MY STORY. That means that I can do WHAT I WANT with it and I wanted to aske all of the WONDERFUL people who have been reading the story what they thought. I happen to find inspiration in the comments that I receive. Sometimes somebody makes a comment in a review about something that I had never even thought of before. For example...Lilly seeing the man outside her apartment window. That was never supposed to go anywhere. It was just supposed to be scenery. In that case I went with it and wrote myself into a corner that I have no idea how to get out of, and completely away from my outline, but it seemed like a good idea. Now I need to think of a way to get back to where I was so that the epilogue that I have already written will still work. So, again, if my polls bother you so much, don't read my story. find another one to read.

Very cool. I'm enjoying the story.

I had been following this story over on hpfandom and had wondered what had happened. Thanks for letting us know where we could keep reading the story! I'm loving this, so please put up the two promised chapters!

Love the Story Please add more I'm so interesting in reading on and seeing where this all winds up
and recomend your writing to all of my friends!

Love it Hope the dad's get there in time.. if they don't how are they going to save her from the ghost?? eeekk I can't wait to read more.