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why are up to chap. 62 gone? rewriting?

thought you said no more death! i don't want arthur to die! update soon *kisses*

Love where the story is going now all the sneaking around and Siri taking the floo powder, cant wait to read more!

please don't let him died. it so great

There were more chapters, but I took out all of the author notes chapters, and review stuff. I don't usually keep those in my computer and it makes it hard to match up the chapters here with my chapters on my laptop when I have to look something up again. Nothing from the story is gone, just the extra junk...

Now see? You are a good author! Cliffhangers, complete thoughts that make your readers want more!

Good Chapter!

--RD

catching up with the reading ^^/ (work keeps me busy, and tired)
>< get Lilly back!!

I vote, no more deaths and no more babies (for now XDD)

Bella should help, and then go, what if she sees Lilly doing (saying) something she deems proper for a pure-blood or a Black and get in her good graces =D (and she can keep appearing ans talking to Lilly from time to time, XD might be fun, Imagine a Hufflepuff talking to the big bad -reformed- Slytherin?

o.o Is Siri Ill? I just... don't know for a moment there.. I thought we could see the mental pain of Lilly in Sirius? T__T for a moment there I saw the boy suffer and it hurt, oh it hurt!

XD what's up with Jazzy? (magically gets her bottle? *__* kick ass witch coming!)

great story! T__T sorry I couldn't review for soo long

=D love!

Chelleybelle --
I have been TRYING to read this story for MONTHS now. I LOVE this story! I just want you to write it and get it done so we know what happens! Rude? Maybe, but you can always delete the review if you choose! Believe me I deleted several that irritated me on my stories.

You are a good author. You have a gem of a storyline here. You just lack the confidence to decide what your characters are going to do next. If that offends you -- WAH! It doesn't make it any less true.

I just want to read YOUR words, YOUR characters, YOUR storyline, and YOUR story. Not polls to insure you get plenty of reviews. Get the confidence you need to write and WRITE what YOU want to happen in the story.

I won't apologize for telling you to write it YOUR way -- when it is YOUR story.

--RD

I thought of Siri showing up to help and Rabastan catching him and holding him ransom for money but Bellatrix spoils it by showing Lilly where Siri is and then leading them to safety and then Harry goes back and kills Rabastan
I think that would be the best idea. Out of the ones that you said anyhow, but I still think that they should have just one more kid. That would just be to funny. Keep up the great work and update soon.

Kat

Okay, Well if Draco comes to the rescue. He could offer his own money in the sum that is the same as he would get if he was suppose to find the key. Bella probably would be pissed, but the grandmothers could tell Bella that if he does not get the money, more than likely Draco or Harry will kill him thus he would enter the realm she is in and he would taunt her relentlessly. Grandmothers could also tell her that it would not be her money he is spending, so what would she care and she could watch him waste it away. This probably will leave the question open to: What would keep RL from going to Malfoy/Potter when the money runs out?

Draco may not like to give money, but for his daughter I doubt he would care. Would it be too hokey to set him up with the account, but then obliviate him so as not to remember Lily is a medium? Thus your ending could be something like they all get into the car and drive to the destination that was set for them to all meet, and on the way there, Sirus can tell his father that Jazzy summoned her bottle because she was hungry, and then with a sly grin say he and Lily will be placed in Hufflepuff...

I agree with you and not another death. I doubt Bella would give to a kind heart and help all of them out. If Potter/Malfoy kill RL, would not Lily see this thus it mayhaps plague her mind, though I suppose Potter tells Draco to take Lily out of the house and Potter really kicks ass and destroys RL.

Yes you are right so many options! Sorry mate, I don't fancy the place you are in. Hang in there it will come to you!