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love the story. glad to see peter do something good. as for neville and hermonie i can see it.

omg i can't believe that that rat did that. i never thought that i would see (well imagine) a sensual longbottom it's hot! update soon *kisses*

I HAVE VERY MUCH ENJOYED YOUR STORY. I READ IT ALL IN ONE NITE . ARE YOU GING TO BE WRITING MORE. AND IF SO WHEN . THANK YOU DARLENE

Oh, where to begin...

First; I love the children. They're wonderful.

Second; You have no idea how happy I am not to see Ron nd Hermione in a relationship. It's a welcome change to see them with other people. I must say, I got a good chuckle out of Ron and Luna, and I do hope you'll have them at the family dinner, I would love to see the way they interact with each other. And, I love Neville and Hermione, that was well done as well.

It shall be interesting to see where this story goes in the future. I am happy with this fiction. You did an awesome job with it~!

"if you have any idea's or thoughts on lucius, death eaters, hermione and neville, or anything else you would like to see happened, let me know!" honey, you so shouldn't have said that.
ok, let's start with lucius: the git either needs another curse around the groinal area to straighten out and get over himself, or he needs to die. what a bitter old coot!! you would think that in five years of missing his son that he would be a little glad to see him, perhaps glad enough to Let It Go!! jeez, what a dick!! i would eagerly embrace something really nasty happening to him. but anyway.
next bit: are there even any death eaters left after five years? and are they really stupid enough to go after the 'boy-who-lived' knowing that their almighty powerful and dead leader never stood a chance against him? wait, we are talking about death eaters aren't we, of course they are that stupid. hopefully though, they will be more pissed that it is lucius' son that is soul bound to him, than anything else, and hopefully take it all out on lucius, hehe. that would be lovely, pissed off death eaters killing off lucius, unknowingly taking care of a little problem for draco, rather than hurting him!! the thought makes me slightly gleefull. *cackles*
as for the lovely little pairing of hermoine and neville, well, neville is one of my favourite characters, and he deserves love and hot steamy sex. not such a huge fan of hermoine overall, but in this story, she helps out my harry when he needed it, so she deserves a reward. and so i think they make a cute couple in this. as long as she looks after my neville!!! its a cute little side couple.
ok now, as for the 'anything else' i am going to take a guess at the current medium and say luna. she was the one that locked them in the room of requirement in the beginning. i think she knew to do that and was setting things up, not only for her friend harry to be happy, but to bring about her successor. i may be way off base about this, but it makes sense to me.
i loved the start of this chapter with the interaction between sev and draco, but i would also love to see harry and sev face to face. after all, they are both different people, sev is happier now, being in love and all, and i wonder how harry would react to him knowing that not only has sev been looking after draco and lilly all this time, but has also set them up to be together again. could be good.
i also cannot wait to see the family at the weasleys house for dinner with the whole family together!! that to me is an opportunity for hilarity. one, because it will be draco sitting having dinner with the weasleys- has living as a muggle helped his obnoxiousness on that issue? i mean, he argued a little about the custody issue, but not so much if he was still anti-weasel. he seems alot more gentle and reasonable now. but he is still a malfoy after all. and then there is the fact that the weasleys, even despite the twins, are rather exuberant and mischievious at the best of times, plenty of opportunities for highjinx and giggles. and then, there is my suspicions about luna, who will be present because of ron. and lilly will be there. if she is who i think she is, then will there be interaction??
*sighs* is all so exciting. i love love love this story so much darl, this has really got me intruiged and enthused and excited and all other kinds of descriptive words. i gonna be hangin' on the edge of my seat on monday waiting for an update to pop up so i can squeal in delight and have my four year old son tell me very politely to 'settle down mummy' -as he does. can't wait!!!!
xoxo

Gah no!! This is to good! You evil evi person!

this is amazing. You are such a talented writer, you did the whole male preg thing in such a way that it seemed normal :D Please continue, and maybe JUST maybe we can find a boatwreck in this story :D

You are doing beautifully with this story. I would tell you to make Lucius see reason and become a good father to Draco and spoil his grandchildren like a good little grandfather would, but that wouldn't be to exciting for a lot of readers that likes the drama of it all. So when it comes to Lucius, I don't know.


As for Hermione I would love her to be with Neville, I don't think that I have read any with that pair. So please keep them together.


I felt really bad for Ginny, she waited so long for nothing. I was thinking that maybe you could pair her with someone nice. Maybe an old friend or someone from work? Or maybe you could pair her with another girl?


Anyway, I love this story and I hate to wait till Monday but I will be here waiting for your update. So hope to see you soon. ^_~

you are definitely one of my favorite authors no one else posts as fast as you do with something that is actually good to read.

I sooo need chapter 19! Hermione and Neville are cute! Oh I wish Lily knew Lucius' plan. Sooo need more!