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for Twisted Fate

by Selera

schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. I really enjoyed reading it. I do so love dark Harry stories. You just don't see enough of them. Well keep up the great work.
Kat
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, when I read the original version of this I thought it had some positive points (mainly the plot idea), but the rewrite is so much better. It's definitely a stronger story, which is what the plot idea deserves. I like it a lot, and hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next, dark Harry is the best. PLEASE update often.
person Vittani
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool! I absolutely loved this. I cant wait for more. Intense. Gotta have more! Have you already redone the other parts cos if you have post em quick! Please?
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I think I like this version better so far.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start if I say so myself. I haven't read the original fic so I have no idea what will happen and I do hope that you will update soon!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the first one you mentioned, but I am liking this one very much...you have me looking forward to the update!!
person Bastian
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I like it so far. I'm wondeing why Harry looks so much like Tom. Does it have something to do with his eyes flashing to red when he is angry since Tom's are red as well? Hmm I'll have to read more to find out. Good work except for a few little spelling errors and grammer errors it was an easy read.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovin it!!! cant wait for the next update! ^-^
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I'm remembering the previous story correctly...I definatly like the rewrite better!
Keep up the good work!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another one up so soon? Good chapter!